2023年12月17日发(作者：督英毅)
议论文的写作
一、陈述观点类
近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1.列举不文明行为；
2.指出其影响；
3.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法：
第一段：开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。
第二段：主体——全文的主要部分，对提出的问题进行分析，运用材料对观点进行论述，列出2～3个赞成或反对的理由。
第三段：结尾——对主体部分进行概括，用一两句话来阐明自己的观点，构成“总——分——总”结构。
本题要求考生以李华的身份就“中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议”这种现象发表自己的观点。可以分为三段：
第一段：提出问题——作为导游，对中国游客在海外的不文明行为感到羞愧。
第二段：列举这些不文明行为的具体表现，说明其恶劣影响。
第三段：表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法——教育游客，出台有关法律文件进行约束。
修订提升
As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find that it is so embarrassing to see
many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.(改为简单句：1.I find it so embarrassing to see
many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.)
They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit
everywhere，and even cross the road ignoring the traffic bad behavior overseas has
harmed(用含有damage的短语替换：/done damage to) the image of the Chinese people
and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop ，tourists should be trained to obey social and public
s，laws should be made to punish badly-behaved people in public places.(用含有
定语从句的复合句改写：s，laws should be made to punish those who behave badly
in public places.) I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for
themselves and our country.
即时训练
下面的漫画反映了北京的雾霾情况。请你根据这幅漫画写一篇英语短文，谈一下你对这个问题的看法。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
参考范文
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
As is shown in the picture，the smog is so heavy that people can hardly recognize each other
when they meet in the suffered a lot because of the the road people drove
slowly because they could not see also suffered from many illnesses caused by
smog has been caused by many factors，of which the increasing number of cars plays an
important cars send off a lot of poisonous gases，adding to the already serious air
pollution.
In my opinion，the number of cars should be should call on people to use more
public in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.
二、正反观点类
假如你是高中生张萌。iPad已经成为你们中学生的新宠。上周你们班就中学生是否应该将iPad带进校园进行了一次讨论。请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。短文内容包括以下要点：
给中学生带来的好处；
给中学生带来的负面影响；
3.你对中学生使用iPad的看法和建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇正反观点类议论文。此类议论文一般采用下面的模式：
第一段：提出问题；第二段：阐明正方的观点；第三段：阐明反方的观点；第四段：作者阐明自己的观点。(有时候第二段和第三段可以合并为一段)
本题要求就“iPad给中学生带来的好处或坏处”进行论述，可以分为四段：
第一段：提出问题或现象——中学生现在流行使用iPad。
第二段：说明使用iPad的好处——可以听音乐、下载学习资料等。
第三段：说明iPad的负面影响——在教室里使用使老师和同学很反感。
第四段：表明自己的观点——学校应该制定一些规定来引导学生使用iPad。
修订提升
Nowadays，it’s fashionable for young students to have the students bring
their iPads to school？Last week we had a heated discussion about it.(合并为一个复合句： week we had a heated discussion about whether the students should bring their iPads to school.)
Some students are in favor of it，because they can listen to music，download a lot of learning
materials and read sly，it is very helpful to their studies.(用“be of＋n.”改写：sly，it’s of great help to their studies.)
However，others are against students bring their iPads to the classroom to listen to
music with earphones and even play video makes teachers and students greatly
annoyed.(合并为含有定语从句的复合句： students bring their iPads to the classroom to listen
to music with earphones and even play video games，which makes teachers and students greatly
annoyed.)
In my opinion，the classroom is a place for studying，and concentration is terribly
ore，schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.
即时训练
假如你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Bob看到共享单车(shared-bike)非常流行但是也有各种乱象的新闻，来e-mail询问你共享单车在中国的现状。请你给他写一封回信，介绍共享单车的现状并分享你的看法，回信包含以下要点：
1.共享单车的好处(两点) ；
2.共享单车的乱象(两种);
3.你对共享单车的看法。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob，
How’s everything going? In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of
the Bike-sharing Program in China.I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Bob，
How’s everything going? In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in China.I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of begin with，riding a bike
is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far
’s more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution.
However，there is also some disturbing news connected with shared-bikes are parked
everywhere，making the city roads messy and still，some shared-bikes have been
damaged，stolen or even burnt.
As far as I’m concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the
traffic rules，I’m definitely in favor of such a you think so?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
2023年12月17日发(作者：督英毅)
议论文的写作
一、陈述观点类
近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。
1.列举不文明行为；
2.指出其影响；
3.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇陈述观点的议论文。此类议论文一般采用“三段式”写法：
第一段：开头——提出一种现象或某个观点作为议论的话题。
第二段：主体——全文的主要部分，对提出的问题进行分析，运用材料对观点进行论述，列出2～3个赞成或反对的理由。
第三段：结尾——对主体部分进行概括，用一两句话来阐明自己的观点，构成“总——分——总”结构。
本题要求考生以李华的身份就“中国游客在海外的不文明行为备受争议”这种现象发表自己的观点。可以分为三段：
第一段：提出问题——作为导游，对中国游客在海外的不文明行为感到羞愧。
第二段：列举这些不文明行为的具体表现，说明其恶劣影响。
第三段：表明自己的观点，提出解决问题的方法——教育游客，出台有关法律文件进行约束。
修订提升
As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find that it is so embarrassing to see
many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.(改为简单句：1.I find it so embarrassing to see
many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad.)
They speak loudly in public places，carve characters on tourist attractions，throw rubbish，spit
everywhere，and even cross the road ignoring the traffic bad behavior overseas has
harmed(用含有damage的短语替换：/done damage to) the image of the Chinese people
and our country as well.
Measures should be taken to stop ，tourists should be trained to obey social and public
s，laws should be made to punish badly-behaved people in public places.(用含有
定语从句的复合句改写：s，laws should be made to punish those who behave badly
in public places.) I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for
themselves and our country.
即时训练
下面的漫画反映了北京的雾霾情况。请你根据这幅漫画写一篇英语短文，谈一下你对这个问题的看法。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
参考范文
It’s high time that we should take measures to reduce the smog!
As is shown in the picture，the smog is so heavy that people can hardly recognize each other
when they meet in the suffered a lot because of the the road people drove
slowly because they could not see also suffered from many illnesses caused by
smog has been caused by many factors，of which the increasing number of cars plays an
important cars send off a lot of poisonous gases，adding to the already serious air
pollution.
In my opinion，the number of cars should be should call on people to use more
public in this way can we expect to have more sunny days.
二、正反观点类
假如你是高中生张萌。iPad已经成为你们中学生的新宠。上周你们班就中学生是否应该将iPad带进校园进行了一次讨论。请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。短文内容包括以下要点：
给中学生带来的好处；
给中学生带来的负面影响；
3.你对中学生使用iPad的看法和建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇正反观点类议论文。此类议论文一般采用下面的模式：
第一段：提出问题；第二段：阐明正方的观点；第三段：阐明反方的观点；第四段：作者阐明自己的观点。(有时候第二段和第三段可以合并为一段)
本题要求就“iPad给中学生带来的好处或坏处”进行论述，可以分为四段：
第一段：提出问题或现象——中学生现在流行使用iPad。
第二段：说明使用iPad的好处——可以听音乐、下载学习资料等。
第三段：说明iPad的负面影响——在教室里使用使老师和同学很反感。
第四段：表明自己的观点——学校应该制定一些规定来引导学生使用iPad。
修订提升
Nowadays，it’s fashionable for young students to have the students bring
their iPads to school？Last week we had a heated discussion about it.(合并为一个复合句： week we had a heated discussion about whether the students should bring their iPads to school.)
Some students are in favor of it，because they can listen to music，download a lot of learning
materials and read sly，it is very helpful to their studies.(用“be of＋n.”改写：sly，it’s of great help to their studies.)
However，others are against students bring their iPads to the classroom to listen to
music with earphones and even play video makes teachers and students greatly
annoyed.(合并为含有定语从句的复合句： students bring their iPads to the classroom to listen
to music with earphones and even play video games，which makes teachers and students greatly
annoyed.)
In my opinion，the classroom is a place for studying，and concentration is terribly
ore，schools should make some rules to instruct the students to use iPads properly.
即时训练
假如你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Bob看到共享单车(shared-bike)非常流行但是也有各种乱象的新闻，来e-mail询问你共享单车在中国的现状。请你给他写一封回信，介绍共享单车的现状并分享你的看法，回信包含以下要点：
1.共享单车的好处(两点) ；
2.共享单车的乱象(两种);
3.你对共享单车的看法。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob，
How’s everything going? In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of
the Bike-sharing Program in China.I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Bob，
How’s everything going? In your last letter you were asking about the current situation of the Bike-sharing Program in China.I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Undoubtedly，the Bike-sharing Program can bring lots of begin with，riding a bike
is not only economic but also time-saving，especially when your destination is not far
’s more，the program makes contributions to reducing air pollution.
However，there is also some disturbing news connected with shared-bikes are parked
everywhere，making the city roads messy and still，some shared-bikes have been
damaged，stolen or even burnt.
As far as I’m concerned，as long as people park the bikes in the right places and obey the
traffic rules，I’m definitely in favor of such a you think so?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua