2024年3月8日发(作者：台依然)
应用文写作
一、电子邮件
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.内容：学习唐诗；
3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题的要求是写一封电子邮件。电子邮件和书信写法和格式大体相同，但也有不同之处。一般由五部分组成：(1)标题栏；(2)称呼语；(3)正文；(4)结尾客套语；(5)落款。
电子邮件的正文部分和一般书信的要求一样。高考中一般只考查电子邮件正文部分的写作。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告知正在学习汉语的英国朋友Leslie下次上课的计划。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达问候，说明写信的目的——详细告诉一些事情。
第二段：介绍下次上课的时间和地点；内容是学习唐诗；需要做的课前准备是简要了解唐朝的历史。
第三段：希望早点收到回复。
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Dear Leslie，
How is everything getting along with you？I’m writing to tell you something in detail.
To start with，I intend to stress that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8
of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.(用what引导的名词性从句改写： start
with，what I intend to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the
Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.)(添加过渡性词语：’s more/Besides/In
addition/Moreover)，in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture，it is of importance for
you to be aware of the content，Tang is no doubt that you are supposed to know
about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance and it will make the class go smoothly.(用含which引导的定语从句的复合句改写： is no doubt that you are supposed to know about
the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance，which will make the class go smoothly.)
I’ll appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大的一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.介绍自己；
2.告知到达时间；
3.希望就做何准备得到建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Lynn，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Lynn，
I’m Li Hua，an exchange student from China.I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with
your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high you for
having me！I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place later that afternoon.I
wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in
Canada.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours，
Li Hua
二、建议信
假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封建议信。建议信是写信人向收信人提出对某事的建议和忠告。通常分为三部分：(1)简要介绍写信的目的——指出针对什么问题给出建议；(2)提出具体的建议和理由并进行总结；(3)表达作者的愿望。
本文要求考生以李华的身份给好友王芳写信，帮助她解决关于“是否放弃打排球”的困扰。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表示听到王芳的麻烦感到难过，表明自己很乐意给对方提出建议。
第二段：提出三条建议：(1)理解老师和家长；(2)减少打排球的时间而不是彻底放弃；(3)合理安排时间，找到学习和爱好之间的平衡。
第三段：表达祝愿。
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Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by are faced with a I
am glad to give you some advice on it.(用定语从句合并为一句： I am glad to give you
some advice on the problem you are faced with.)As you said，your teachers and parents suggest you
give up playing volleyball because of the college entrance examination.
(添加过渡性词语：/First of all)，you should understand your teachers and parents，who
just want the best for ，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball
instead of giving it ，you should arrange your time long as you can make a
balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not be against(用高级词汇替换： to) it.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
(2018·“超级全能生”浙江联考)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris将于10月来中国旅游，请你用英语给他写封建议信。内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.来中国前做些准备，如看一些有关中国文化的书，学会使用筷子……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Chris，
How is everything with you？I’m glad to know you will come to China this October.
I’m writing to suggest what preparations you should ，it would be nice to read
some books on Chinese ，it couldn’t be better if you learn to use chopsticks，which
makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese the way，if you practice some everyday
greeting expressions，you’ll feel more comfortable during your stay in China.
Hope my humble proposals could be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
三、求助信
假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在三月十日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)，你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写封邮件，请他推荐。
要求：
1.主题是关于友谊；
2.时间限定在4到5分钟；
3.每个节目最多6个角色。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封求助信。求助信是针对自己遇到的问题，向别人寻求帮助的信件。一般分三部分：(1)开头部分：先进行问候，然后说明写信的目的；(2)主体部分：详细说明自己所遇到的困难并请求帮助；(3)结尾部分：表示感谢和期盼之情。
本题要求考生以李华的身份给Peter写信求助，想参加配音比赛，却不知该选什么电影。所以请Peter给推荐合适的电影。正文可分为三段来写：
第一段：问候对方并交代写信的目的——求助。
第二段：说明自己遇到的具体困难——想参加配音比赛，但是不知道选择哪部电影合适，所以求推荐。
第三段：表示感谢和期盼之情。
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Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I am writing to you，hoping to seek for help.(用in the hope of改写：1.I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help.)
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a
r，I don’t know which film is suitable.(合并为一个句子：2.I am eager to have a try
but I don’t know which film is suitable.)As a movie fan，would you give me some
recommendations? According to the requirements，the theme should be about each
video may last 4 to 5 minutes.(添加过渡性词语：’s more/In
addition/Moreover/Besides)，there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the g forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你将代表班级参加下周三举行的校英语演讲比赛，由于第一次参加比赛，没有经验，所以你要写一封电子邮件给你的外教James，请他帮助你修改演讲稿，并给你一些演讲方面的建议。
要点提示：
1.说明事由；
2.请求帮助；
3.表明感谢和期待回复的心情。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear James，
I’m writing to ask you for a English speaking contest is scheduled to be held in
our school next I was lucky enough to be chosen to attend it representing my
know this is the first time that I’ve participated in such a contest，so I don’t have any
relevant skills.I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions on how to
deliver an impressive s，the following is my draft for the you please
polish it for me?
Thanks again for your help and looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、道歉信
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封道歉信。道歉信是指因做错事给别人带来麻烦，而写信给对方赔礼道歉的信件。写道歉信的注意事项：
1.分三部分来写：(1)开头表达歉意；(2)接着解释道歉的原因；(3)结尾再次请对方接受自己的道歉。
2.语言要诚恳，解释的理由要真实、合理。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写一封因为不能按时赴约而向朋友Bob表示道歉的邮件，可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达问候，然后说明写信的原因——为不能和朋友一起去书店而道歉。
第二段：解释不能去的原因——忙于准备即将到来的期末考试。
第三段：再次希望对方接受自己的道歉，并提出另约时间的建议(用商量的语气提出)。
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Dear Bob，
How is everything going？I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the
bookstore with you next weekend.(用for引导的并列句改写：1.I’m writing to express my
regret，for I won’t be able to go to the bookstore with you next weekend.)I feel terribly sorry
about it and want you to know what happened.
My final exam will be held in two weeks and it makes me concerned.(用what引导的名词性从句改写： makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held in two weeks.)I
hope you could appreciate that I must try my best(用高级词汇替换： no effort) to make
preparations for it if possible.
I sincerely hope you can accept my we make another appointment to go to the
bookstore together? Please let me know what time is OK for g forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写封道歉信，请求原谅。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头与结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mike，
I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from I’m
expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.
Actually，I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school to my sorrow，it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but angry and guilty I felt！This
morning，I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very r，I
promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this
month.
Please forgive me again and accept my sincere wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
五、邀请信
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封邀请信。一般分为四部分：(1)介绍写信的目的——邀请某人做某事；(2)介绍活动的具体内容(时间、地点等)；(3)表达希望对方能够参加的诚意；请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈，如确认接受邀请。(4)表示期盼。时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
本题要求考生以李华的身份邀请外教Henry来看中国的剪纸展览。可分为三段：
第一段：介绍写信的目的——邀请外教Henry来看中国的剪纸艺术展。
第二段：介绍这次展览的时间、地点和内容。
第三段：请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈——如果感兴趣，请给我发邮件。
第四段：表示期盼。
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Dear Henry，
I’m Li Hua.I’m writing to invite you to see the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition.
The exhibition will be held in the City Museum，starting from June 16th and lasting for more
than a week.A large number of paper-cut works by experts throughout China will be on show，and some of them are made by famous artists.(改为定语从句：1.A large number of paper-cut
works by experts throughout China will be on show，some of which are made by famous
artists.)The paper cuts are about different(用高级词汇替换：s) we visit the
exhibition(用非谓语动词改写：ng the exhibition)，we will not only enjoy the folk art
works，but also learn a lot.
If you’re interested in the Chinese folk art，please e-mail can make it any day to visit
the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华，你们学校将举行一次英语沙龙活动，请你给外教Jeff写一封邀请信，邀请他给你们做主题为“西方节日”的讲座。邀请信的内容包括：
1.英语沙龙活动的具体时间、地点和主题；
2.选择该主题的原因；
3.期待对方的回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jeff，
Our school is going to have an English Salon.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jeff，
Our school is going to have an English warmly invite you to prepare a presentation
for give us a lecture about Western holidays.
The Salon will be at the lecture room from 9 to 11 in the morning on Saturday，January
n holidays are becoming increasingly popular in of us are interested in
them and we want to know more about the holidays in the West.
We would really appreciate your are looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、申请信
假定你是李华，请用英文写一封申请信，申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.家庭条件及个人优势；
3.安排英国朋友参加的活动。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：接待家庭host family
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封申请信。申请信一般包括三部分：(1)写信的目的——申请什么职位、工作等；(2)介绍自身具备的条件；(3)恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请并表示感谢，期待回复。
本题要求考生以李华的身份申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达自己申请成为“志愿家庭”的愿望；
第二段：介绍自己家所具备的条件；
第三段：再次表达自己的申请愿望，恳请对方考虑自己的申请并表示感谢。
修订提升
Dear Sir/Madam，
I sincerely hope my family can have the honor to be a host family.
Our home is next to the city center，so easy shopping access and convenient
transportation are available.(改写为定语从句： home is next to the city center where easy
shopping access and convenient transportation are available.)I have a good command of
makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.(合并为一个简单句： good command of English makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.) If
given the chance，I’ll invite our guest to join in my family s，we can show
him around the city and get him to know more about the real life and culture in China.(改为含有现在分词短语的句子：s，we can show him around the city，getting him to know more
about the real life and culture in China.)
In a word，I’m eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend.I hope you can take
my application into you in advance.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
即时训练
(2018·温州9月适应性测试)
World Without Borders(义工组织)正在招募前往斯里兰卡(Sri Lanka)支教的义工。假定你是高中生李华，请写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.介绍自己；
2.申请理由。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a senior school student from China.I’m writing to apply for the job as a
volunteer teacher in Sri Lanka.
With abundant previous experience，I’m sure I’ll be fit for the importantly，I have
a good command of English and get on well with kids，which will enable me to be a qualified
teacher.
I would be grateful if offered the g forward to your earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
七、投诉信
假设你是李华，两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物(Bookworm Series)，昨天才收到货，且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网点客服写封邮件投诉。要点如下：
1.介绍购物情况；
2.反映存在问题；
3.提出解决方案。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封投诉信。投诉信一般包括三部分：(1)自我介绍并表明要投诉的问题，要做到客观、礼貌、实事求是；(2)写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果；(3)提出解决方案，表达自己的诉求或愿望。
本题要求考生以李华的身份进行投诉：从网上买的书送货太慢、包装破损、数量不足。主体部分可分为三段：
第一段：介绍在网上订购一套英语书虫系列读物的情况。
第二段：提出存在的问题——送货慢、书的封面破损、书的数量不足。
第三段：表达自己对这次购物的失望，表明自己的诉求——要么退钱要么邮寄一套新的给自己。
修订提升
To whom it may concern，
I’m one of your customers.I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks
ago.
However，I didn’t receive them until the books were so poorly packed up
that the cover of one book was torn，which made me very disappointed.(用含有disappointment的句子改写： much to my disappointment，the books were so poorly packed up that the cover
of one book was torn.)(添加过渡性词语： make matters worse/Worse still/What’s worse)，it is not a complete set，as I found one book missing.
I’m sorry to have received such poor can return my can also
deliver a new set of books to me.(用改写： can either return my money or deliver
a new set of books to me.) Besides，I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my
complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假定你是李华，你和父母在澳洲旅游期间于5月1日至2日入住Golden Bay Hotel酒店，但对其提供的服务不满意：1.搬运工送到房间的皮箱破损；2.卫生间漏水；3.楼下酒吧噪音持续到很晚，影响休息。请发电子邮件给酒店的管理者进行投诉，希望改进服务。
注意：
1.必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯；
2.词数80左右；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：搬运工porter；漏水leak
Dear Manager，
My name is Li Hua.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Manager，
My name is Li Hua.I stayed at your hotel，Golden Bay Hotel during my visit to Australia from
May 1 to 2 with my r，the service in your hotel was too bad.I’m writing this
e-mail to express my dissatisfaction.
First，we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our ，water was
leaking out of the toilet in the ，the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late
into the night that we couldn’t have a good rest.
I sincerely hope you can improve your service so that none of the above happens again.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
八、通知
假定你是李华，作为交换生正在英国学校学习。为了推广中国文化，学生会将于2017年6月20 日在学校报告厅举办“中国诗词大会”(Chinese Poetry Conference)，请你用英语写一则通知告知该校同学有关参赛事宜。
要点：1.报名时间、地点；
2.比赛内容：中国诗词，以唐诗为主；
3.奖品：《唐诗三百首》；
4.联系人及联系方式：李华*********。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一则通知。一般分为三部分：(1)介绍主题；(2)交代相关的时间、地点和活动内容；(3)提出要求。
写通知的注意事项：
(1)一般情况下，通知的首行中央写上Notice。通知的发布单位通常写在正文结束的右下角，发布日期一般写在正文的左下角或写在通知正文的右上角。
(2)通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容，故多用将来时，一般用祈使句来强调。
(3)通知的语言要简洁明了，准确无误，特别是时间必须写得十分明确。
本题要求通知该校学生有关在学校报告厅举办“中国诗词大会”的事情。可分为三段：
第一段：说明通知的内容——我们学校要举办“中国诗词大会”。
第二段：介绍此次活动的具体情况：举行的时间、地点，对参加者的具体要求。
第三段：告知大家联系方式。
修订提升
Notice
In order to promote Chinese culture，our school will hold a Chinese Poetry Conference.I’d
like to inform you of some details as follows.
As it is scheduled(改为省略结构： scheduled)，the conference is to be held in the school
lecture hall at 7：00 pm on June 20,2017，before which you are supposed to get adequately
prepared.(添加过渡性词语：ore)，it’s strongly recommended that you recite enough
classical poetry and focus on the poems of the Tang appealing prize Three Hundred
Tang Poems is waiting for r wants to participate，please sign up in the Student Union
office before March 31.
For any question，please e-********************.Youare sure to(用高级词汇替换： bound to) benefit a lot from it.
即时训练
假设你是校图书馆馆长的学生助理李华，图书馆要进行网络系统升级，请在阅览室向在场的学生口头通知相关事宜，并请他们转告其他学生。
1.时间：2017年5月1日至5月10日；
2.在此期间，关闭阅览室，暂停电子阅览；
3.仅周二和周五可以借、还图书。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Hello everybody！May I have your attention？The library will soon be carrying out an update
of the Internet system.I would like everybody to know that from May 1st to May 10th 2017，the
reading room will be closed and the e-reading system will be temporarily will only be
able to borrow and return books on Tuesdays and Fridays.
Please pass on this message to those who are not here you all.
九、倡议书
越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如堵车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。内容包括：
1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；
2.别在街道或马路上玩耍；
3.劝父母不要酒后驾车。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：斑马线zebra-crossing
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇倡议书。写倡议书的注意事项：
(1)倡议书的结构为：标题、正文、署名和日期。高考一般只考正文部分。
(2)正文部分一般包括三部分：开头、主体和结尾。开头部分要简明扼要地写出倡议的目的、意义和有关背景；主体部分写倡议的主要内容和具体措施；结尾部分写倡议者的决心和希望。
本题要求考生写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。可分为三段：
第一段：说明此次倡议的背景——车辆的增加带来了很多问题：交通拥挤和交通事故。
第二段：写出倡议的主要内容——遵守交通规则，不要在公路上玩耍，告诉父母应该怎么做等。
第三段：再次强调此次倡议的意义，表达希望——交通安全，人人有责。
修订提升
More and more cars are coming into our families and we are happy that it has greatly
improved our life.(改为含有with复合结构的句子： more and more cars coming into our
families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.)But unluckily，it has also brought many
problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody’s must obey the ’t play on the
can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and
laugh while they are driving(改为省略结构： driving).
We can say cars are coming into our life，but we can be safe driving on roads and walking
on sidewalks only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business.(改为倒装结构： only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business can we be safe
driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.)
即时训练
假设你是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，为了弘扬雷锋精神，你校决定开展多项志愿服务活动。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英语报上，号召同学们加入本校的志愿者俱乐部。内容包括：
1.陈述当志愿者的好处；
2.向同学们发出几点倡议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
Volunteering has a positive effect on our community.
That’s you!
参考范文
Dear fellow students，
Volunteering has a positive effect on our y，volunteering helps us learn more
about society and gain valuable ly，volunteering provides us with a good
opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.
I hope more students will join the voluntary club of our ’s express concern for the
old and the disabled around ’s clean parks near our ’s go to nursing homes to
bring love to those in need.
Remember, we can make a difference if we lend a helping hand，so let’s take action.
That’s you!
十、演讲稿
假如你是李华，作为高三毕业生代表，你将在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文作一个简短的告别演讲。内容要点如下：
1.对三年高中生活的怀念；
2.对老师的感谢；
3.对母校的祝福。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿在结构安排上可分为三部分：(1)呈现主题；(2)分析主题，给出自己的观点；(3)进行总结。此类文章的写作要注意开头的称呼()和结尾的结束语(That’s you！/Thank you for your listening.等)。
本题要求考生以李华的身份，在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文作一个简短的告别演讲。可分为三段：
第一段：表达对三年高中生活的怀念；
第二段：表达对老师的感谢；
第三段：表达对母校的祝福。
修订提升
Dear teachers and fellow students，
How time flies! We’ll say goodbye to our mother school past three years has been
really a wonderful journey with you guys.
Our great teachers contributed their time，energy and love so that they can make the
journey safe and fruitful.(改为简单句： make the journey safe and fruitful，our great teachers
contributed their time，energy and love.)Here，we are extremely grateful for all that，dear
teachers，have done for us.(改为what引导的名词性从句：，we are extremely grateful for
what you，dear teachers，have done for us.) It’ll soon be the time for us to it is not the
just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.
(添加过渡性词语：y)，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our
sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.
Thank you!
即时训练
你校学生会决定举办一场以“我有一个梦想”为主题的演讲比赛。作为即将上大学的高三学生，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.你的梦想；
2.说明理由；
3.如何实现。
注意：
1.可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得使用真实校名和人名；
3.词数80左右；
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I Have a Dream
Dear fellow students，
I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here.
That’s you!
参考范文
I Have a Dream
Dear fellow students，
I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you has always been my best
wish to be a teacher.I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in
the teachers did and said influenced me so much that the dream of becoming a teacher has been
deeply rooted in my mind.
As the saying goes，teachers are engineers of human a teacher demands a
lot.I’ve made up my mind to major in ore，I’m going to work hard，train my
character and develop good qualities.I believe I’ll realize the dream through my constant efforts.
That’s you！
2024年3月8日发(作者：台依然)
应用文写作
一、电子邮件
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.内容：学习唐诗；
3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题的要求是写一封电子邮件。电子邮件和书信写法和格式大体相同，但也有不同之处。一般由五部分组成：(1)标题栏；(2)称呼语；(3)正文；(4)结尾客套语；(5)落款。
电子邮件的正文部分和一般书信的要求一样。高考中一般只考查电子邮件正文部分的写作。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写一封电子邮件告知正在学习汉语的英国朋友Leslie下次上课的计划。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达问候，说明写信的目的——详细告诉一些事情。
第二段：介绍下次上课的时间和地点；内容是学习唐诗；需要做的课前准备是简要了解唐朝的历史。
第三段：希望早点收到回复。
修订提升
Dear Leslie，
How is everything getting along with you？I’m writing to tell you something in detail.
To start with，I intend to stress that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8
of the Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.(用what引导的名词性从句改写： start
with，what I intend to stress is that we are about to start our next lesson in Classroom 8 of the
Teaching Building at 10 am next Friday.)(添加过渡性词语：’s more/Besides/In
addition/Moreover)，in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture，it is of importance for
you to be aware of the content，Tang is no doubt that you are supposed to know
about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance and it will make the class go smoothly.(用含which引导的定语从句的复合句改写： is no doubt that you are supposed to know about
the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance，which will make the class go smoothly.)
I’ll appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大的一所高中学习，住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.介绍自己；
2.告知到达时间；
3.希望就做何准备得到建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Lynn，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Lynn，
I’m Li Hua，an exchange student from China.I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with
your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high you for
having me！I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place later that afternoon.I
wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in
Canada.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours，
Li Hua
二、建议信
假定你是李华，你的好友王芳喜欢打排球，但老师和家长都极力劝她放弃打排球，全身心投入高考。为此，她非常纠结和郁闷。请你给她写一封建议信，帮她解决这个困扰。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封建议信。建议信是写信人向收信人提出对某事的建议和忠告。通常分为三部分：(1)简要介绍写信的目的——指出针对什么问题给出建议；(2)提出具体的建议和理由并进行总结；(3)表达作者的愿望。
本文要求考生以李华的身份给好友王芳写信，帮助她解决关于“是否放弃打排球”的困扰。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表示听到王芳的麻烦感到难过，表明自己很乐意给对方提出建议。
第二段：提出三条建议：(1)理解老师和家长；(2)减少打排球的时间而不是彻底放弃；(3)合理安排时间，找到学习和爱好之间的平衡。
第三段：表达祝愿。
修订提升
Dear Wang Fang，
I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by are faced with a I
am glad to give you some advice on it.(用定语从句合并为一句： I am glad to give you
some advice on the problem you are faced with.)As you said，your teachers and parents suggest you
give up playing volleyball because of the college entrance examination.
(添加过渡性词语：/First of all)，you should understand your teachers and parents，who
just want the best for ，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball
instead of giving it ，you should arrange your time long as you can make a
balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not be against(用高级词汇替换： to) it.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
(2018·“超级全能生”浙江联考)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris将于10月来中国旅游，请你用英语给他写封建议信。内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.来中国前做些准备，如看一些有关中国文化的书，学会使用筷子……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Chris，
How is everything with you？I’m glad to know you will come to China this October.
I’m writing to suggest what preparations you should ，it would be nice to read
some books on Chinese ，it couldn’t be better if you learn to use chopsticks，which
makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese the way，if you practice some everyday
greeting expressions，you’ll feel more comfortable during your stay in China.
Hope my humble proposals could be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
三、求助信
假定你是高中生李华，你们学校要在三月十日举办英语配音比赛(dubbing contest)，你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写封邮件，请他推荐。
要求：
1.主题是关于友谊；
2.时间限定在4到5分钟；
3.每个节目最多6个角色。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封求助信。求助信是针对自己遇到的问题，向别人寻求帮助的信件。一般分三部分：(1)开头部分：先进行问候，然后说明写信的目的；(2)主体部分：详细说明自己所遇到的困难并请求帮助；(3)结尾部分：表示感谢和期盼之情。
本题要求考生以李华的身份给Peter写信求助，想参加配音比赛，却不知该选什么电影。所以请Peter给推荐合适的电影。正文可分为三段来写：
第一段：问候对方并交代写信的目的——求助。
第二段：说明自己遇到的具体困难——想参加配音比赛，但是不知道选择哪部电影合适，所以求推荐。
第三段：表示感谢和期盼之情。
修订提升
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I am writing to you，hoping to seek for help.(用in the hope of改写：1.I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help.)
Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a
r，I don’t know which film is suitable.(合并为一个句子：2.I am eager to have a try
but I don’t know which film is suitable.)As a movie fan，would you give me some
recommendations? According to the requirements，the theme should be about each
video may last 4 to 5 minutes.(添加过渡性词语：’s more/In
addition/Moreover/Besides)，there should not be more than six characters in each video.
I would really appreciate it if you could do me the g forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你将代表班级参加下周三举行的校英语演讲比赛，由于第一次参加比赛，没有经验，所以你要写一封电子邮件给你的外教James，请他帮助你修改演讲稿，并给你一些演讲方面的建议。
要点提示：
1.说明事由；
2.请求帮助；
3.表明感谢和期待回复的心情。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear James，
I’m writing to ask you for a English speaking contest is scheduled to be held in
our school next I was lucky enough to be chosen to attend it representing my
know this is the first time that I’ve participated in such a contest，so I don’t have any
relevant skills.I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions on how to
deliver an impressive s，the following is my draft for the you please
polish it for me?
Thanks again for your help and looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、道歉信
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封道歉信。道歉信是指因做错事给别人带来麻烦，而写信给对方赔礼道歉的信件。写道歉信的注意事项：
1.分三部分来写：(1)开头表达歉意；(2)接着解释道歉的原因；(3)结尾再次请对方接受自己的道歉。
2.语言要诚恳，解释的理由要真实、合理。
本题要求考生以李华的身份写一封因为不能按时赴约而向朋友Bob表示道歉的邮件，可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达问候，然后说明写信的原因——为不能和朋友一起去书店而道歉。
第二段：解释不能去的原因——忙于准备即将到来的期末考试。
第三段：再次希望对方接受自己的道歉，并提出另约时间的建议(用商量的语气提出)。
修订提升
Dear Bob，
How is everything going？I’m writing to express my regret at being unable to go to the
bookstore with you next weekend.(用for引导的并列句改写：1.I’m writing to express my
regret，for I won’t be able to go to the bookstore with you next weekend.)I feel terribly sorry
about it and want you to know what happened.
My final exam will be held in two weeks and it makes me concerned.(用what引导的名词性从句改写： makes me concerned is my final exam which will be held in two weeks.)I
hope you could appreciate that I must try my best(用高级词汇替换： no effort) to make
preparations for it if possible.
I sincerely hope you can accept my we make another appointment to go to the
bookstore together? Please let me know what time is OK for g forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是李华，你从朋友Mike处借的一本书不慎遗失。现在，请用英文给他写封道歉信，请求原谅。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头与结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mike，
I’m sorry to tell you that I’ve lost your book that I borrowed from I’m
expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.
Actually，I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school to my sorrow，it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but angry and guilty I felt！This
morning，I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very r，I
promise that I’ll tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this
month.
Please forgive me again and accept my sincere wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
五、邀请信
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封邀请信。一般分为四部分：(1)介绍写信的目的——邀请某人做某事；(2)介绍活动的具体内容(时间、地点等)；(3)表达希望对方能够参加的诚意；请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈，如确认接受邀请。(4)表示期盼。时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
本题要求考生以李华的身份邀请外教Henry来看中国的剪纸展览。可分为三段：
第一段：介绍写信的目的——邀请外教Henry来看中国的剪纸艺术展。
第二段：介绍这次展览的时间、地点和内容。
第三段：请收信人对发出的邀请做出反馈——如果感兴趣，请给我发邮件。
第四段：表示期盼。
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Dear Henry，
I’m Li Hua.I’m writing to invite you to see the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition.
The exhibition will be held in the City Museum，starting from June 16th and lasting for more
than a week.A large number of paper-cut works by experts throughout China will be on show，and some of them are made by famous artists.(改为定语从句：1.A large number of paper-cut
works by experts throughout China will be on show，some of which are made by famous
artists.)The paper cuts are about different(用高级词汇替换：s) we visit the
exhibition(用非谓语动词改写：ng the exhibition)，we will not only enjoy the folk art
works，but also learn a lot.
If you’re interested in the Chinese folk art，please e-mail can make it any day to visit
the exhibition.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华，你们学校将举行一次英语沙龙活动，请你给外教Jeff写一封邀请信，邀请他给你们做主题为“西方节日”的讲座。邀请信的内容包括：
1.英语沙龙活动的具体时间、地点和主题；
2.选择该主题的原因；
3.期待对方的回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jeff，
Our school is going to have an English Salon.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jeff，
Our school is going to have an English warmly invite you to prepare a presentation
for give us a lecture about Western holidays.
The Salon will be at the lecture room from 9 to 11 in the morning on Saturday，January
n holidays are becoming increasingly popular in of us are interested in
them and we want to know more about the holidays in the West.
We would really appreciate your are looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、申请信
假定你是李华，请用英文写一封申请信，申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：
1.自我介绍；
2.家庭条件及个人优势；
3.安排英国朋友参加的活动。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：接待家庭host family
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封申请信。申请信一般包括三部分：(1)写信的目的——申请什么职位、工作等；(2)介绍自身具备的条件；(3)恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请并表示感谢，期待回复。
本题要求考生以李华的身份申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson。可分为三段来写：
第一段：表达自己申请成为“志愿家庭”的愿望；
第二段：介绍自己家所具备的条件；
第三段：再次表达自己的申请愿望，恳请对方考虑自己的申请并表示感谢。
修订提升
Dear Sir/Madam，
I sincerely hope my family can have the honor to be a host family.
Our home is next to the city center，so easy shopping access and convenient
transportation are available.(改写为定语从句： home is next to the city center where easy
shopping access and convenient transportation are available.)I have a good command of
makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.(合并为一个简单句： good command of English makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.) If
given the chance，I’ll invite our guest to join in my family s，we can show
him around the city and get him to know more about the real life and culture in China.(改为含有现在分词短语的句子：s，we can show him around the city，getting him to know more
about the real life and culture in China.)
In a word，I’m eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend.I hope you can take
my application into you in advance.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
即时训练
(2018·温州9月适应性测试)
World Without Borders(义工组织)正在招募前往斯里兰卡(Sri Lanka)支教的义工。假定你是高中生李华，请写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.介绍自己；
2.申请理由。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a senior school student from China.I’m writing to apply for the job as a
volunteer teacher in Sri Lanka.
With abundant previous experience，I’m sure I’ll be fit for the importantly，I have
a good command of English and get on well with kids，which will enable me to be a qualified
teacher.
I would be grateful if offered the g forward to your earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
七、投诉信
假设你是李华，两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物(Bookworm Series)，昨天才收到货，且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网点客服写封邮件投诉。要点如下：
1.介绍购物情况；
2.反映存在问题；
3.提出解决方案。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一封投诉信。投诉信一般包括三部分：(1)自我介绍并表明要投诉的问题，要做到客观、礼貌、实事求是；(2)写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果；(3)提出解决方案，表达自己的诉求或愿望。
本题要求考生以李华的身份进行投诉：从网上买的书送货太慢、包装破损、数量不足。主体部分可分为三段：
第一段：介绍在网上订购一套英语书虫系列读物的情况。
第二段：提出存在的问题——送货慢、书的封面破损、书的数量不足。
第三段：表达自己对这次购物的失望，表明自己的诉求——要么退钱要么邮寄一套新的给自己。
修订提升
To whom it may concern，
I’m one of your customers.I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks
ago.
However，I didn’t receive them until the books were so poorly packed up
that the cover of one book was torn，which made me very disappointed.(用含有disappointment的句子改写： much to my disappointment，the books were so poorly packed up that the cover
of one book was torn.)(添加过渡性词语： make matters worse/Worse still/What’s worse)，it is not a complete set，as I found one book missing.
I’m sorry to have received such poor can return my can also
deliver a new set of books to me.(用改写： can either return my money or deliver
a new set of books to me.) Besides，I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my
complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
即时训练
假定你是李华，你和父母在澳洲旅游期间于5月1日至2日入住Golden Bay Hotel酒店，但对其提供的服务不满意：1.搬运工送到房间的皮箱破损；2.卫生间漏水；3.楼下酒吧噪音持续到很晚，影响休息。请发电子邮件给酒店的管理者进行投诉，希望改进服务。
注意：
1.必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯；
2.词数80左右；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：搬运工porter；漏水leak
Dear Manager，
My name is Li Hua.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Manager，
My name is Li Hua.I stayed at your hotel，Golden Bay Hotel during my visit to Australia from
May 1 to 2 with my r，the service in your hotel was too bad.I’m writing this
e-mail to express my dissatisfaction.
First，we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our ，water was
leaking out of the toilet in the ，the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late
into the night that we couldn’t have a good rest.
I sincerely hope you can improve your service so that none of the above happens again.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
八、通知
假定你是李华，作为交换生正在英国学校学习。为了推广中国文化，学生会将于2017年6月20 日在学校报告厅举办“中国诗词大会”(Chinese Poetry Conference)，请你用英语写一则通知告知该校同学有关参赛事宜。
要点：1.报名时间、地点；
2.比赛内容：中国诗词，以唐诗为主；
3.奖品：《唐诗三百首》；
4.联系人及联系方式：李华*********。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一则通知。一般分为三部分：(1)介绍主题；(2)交代相关的时间、地点和活动内容；(3)提出要求。
写通知的注意事项：
(1)一般情况下，通知的首行中央写上Notice。通知的发布单位通常写在正文结束的右下角，发布日期一般写在正文的左下角或写在通知正文的右上角。
(2)通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容，故多用将来时，一般用祈使句来强调。
(3)通知的语言要简洁明了，准确无误，特别是时间必须写得十分明确。
本题要求通知该校学生有关在学校报告厅举办“中国诗词大会”的事情。可分为三段：
第一段：说明通知的内容——我们学校要举办“中国诗词大会”。
第二段：介绍此次活动的具体情况：举行的时间、地点，对参加者的具体要求。
第三段：告知大家联系方式。
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Notice
In order to promote Chinese culture，our school will hold a Chinese Poetry Conference.I’d
like to inform you of some details as follows.
As it is scheduled(改为省略结构： scheduled)，the conference is to be held in the school
lecture hall at 7：00 pm on June 20,2017，before which you are supposed to get adequately
prepared.(添加过渡性词语：ore)，it’s strongly recommended that you recite enough
classical poetry and focus on the poems of the Tang appealing prize Three Hundred
Tang Poems is waiting for r wants to participate，please sign up in the Student Union
office before March 31.
For any question，please e-********************.Youare sure to(用高级词汇替换： bound to) benefit a lot from it.
即时训练
假设你是校图书馆馆长的学生助理李华，图书馆要进行网络系统升级，请在阅览室向在场的学生口头通知相关事宜，并请他们转告其他学生。
1.时间：2017年5月1日至5月10日；
2.在此期间，关闭阅览室，暂停电子阅览；
3.仅周二和周五可以借、还图书。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文
Hello everybody！May I have your attention？The library will soon be carrying out an update
of the Internet system.I would like everybody to know that from May 1st to May 10th 2017，the
reading room will be closed and the e-reading system will be temporarily will only be
able to borrow and return books on Tuesdays and Fridays.
Please pass on this message to those who are not here you all.
九、倡议书
越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如堵车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来了极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。内容包括：
1.遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线；
2.别在街道或马路上玩耍；
3.劝父母不要酒后驾车。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：斑马线zebra-crossing
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇倡议书。写倡议书的注意事项：
(1)倡议书的结构为：标题、正文、署名和日期。高考一般只考正文部分。
(2)正文部分一般包括三部分：开头、主体和结尾。开头部分要简明扼要地写出倡议的目的、意义和有关背景；主体部分写倡议的主要内容和具体措施；结尾部分写倡议者的决心和希望。
本题要求考生写一篇有关交通安全的倡议书。可分为三段：
第一段：说明此次倡议的背景——车辆的增加带来了很多问题：交通拥挤和交通事故。
第二段：写出倡议的主要内容——遵守交通规则，不要在公路上玩耍，告诉父母应该怎么做等。
第三段：再次强调此次倡议的意义，表达希望——交通安全，人人有责。
修订提升
More and more cars are coming into our families and we are happy that it has greatly
improved our life.(改为含有with复合结构的句子： more and more cars coming into our
families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.)But unluckily，it has also brought many
problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody’s must obey the ’t play on the
can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and
laugh while they are driving(改为省略结构： driving).
We can say cars are coming into our life，but we can be safe driving on roads and walking
on sidewalks only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business.(改为倒装结构： only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business can we be safe
driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.)
即时训练
假设你是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，为了弘扬雷锋精神，你校决定开展多项志愿服务活动。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英语报上，号召同学们加入本校的志愿者俱乐部。内容包括：
1.陈述当志愿者的好处；
2.向同学们发出几点倡议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
Volunteering has a positive effect on our community.
That’s you!
参考范文
Dear fellow students，
Volunteering has a positive effect on our y，volunteering helps us learn more
about society and gain valuable ly，volunteering provides us with a good
opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.
I hope more students will join the voluntary club of our ’s express concern for the
old and the disabled around ’s clean parks near our ’s go to nursing homes to
bring love to those in need.
Remember, we can make a difference if we lend a helping hand，so let’s take action.
That’s you!
十、演讲稿
假如你是李华，作为高三毕业生代表，你将在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文作一个简短的告别演讲。内容要点如下：
1.对三年高中生活的怀念；
2.对老师的感谢；
3.对母校的祝福。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
本题要求写一篇演讲稿。演讲稿在结构安排上可分为三部分：(1)呈现主题；(2)分析主题，给出自己的观点；(3)进行总结。此类文章的写作要注意开头的称呼()和结尾的结束语(That’s you！/Thank you for your listening.等)。
本题要求考生以李华的身份，在学校举办的毕业晚会上用英文作一个简短的告别演讲。可分为三段：
第一段：表达对三年高中生活的怀念；
第二段：表达对老师的感谢；
第三段：表达对母校的祝福。
修订提升
Dear teachers and fellow students，
How time flies! We’ll say goodbye to our mother school past three years has been
really a wonderful journey with you guys.
Our great teachers contributed their time，energy and love so that they can make the
journey safe and fruitful.(改为简单句： make the journey safe and fruitful，our great teachers
contributed their time，energy and love.)Here，we are extremely grateful for all that，dear
teachers，have done for us.(改为what引导的名词性从句：，we are extremely grateful for
what you，dear teachers，have done for us.) It’ll soon be the time for us to it is not the
just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.
(添加过渡性词语：y)，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our
sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers.
Thank you!
即时训练
你校学生会决定举办一场以“我有一个梦想”为主题的演讲比赛。作为即将上大学的高三学生，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.你的梦想；
2.说明理由；
3.如何实现。
注意：
1.可根据内容适当发挥；
2.文中不得使用真实校名和人名；
3.词数80左右；
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
I Have a Dream
Dear fellow students，
I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you here.
That’s you!
参考范文
I Have a Dream
Dear fellow students，
I am so pleased to have a chance to share my dream with you has always been my best
wish to be a teacher.I never forget how I was encouraged to raise new hope when in
the teachers did and said influenced me so much that the dream of becoming a teacher has been
deeply rooted in my mind.
As the saying goes，teachers are engineers of human a teacher demands a
lot.I’ve made up my mind to major in ore，I’m going to work hard，train my
character and develop good qualities.I believe I’ll realize the dream through my constant efforts.
That’s you！