2024年3月20日发(作者：法馨)
2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.I
parkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhad
atawindowcaughtmyattention,so
hummingbird(蜂鸟),
coveredinspider-webs(蛛网)sedher
struggletheinstantIpickedherup.
Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.
edapieceofclothintothe
holeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.
WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithher
,
sshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoo
longandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?
AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawater
bottle,ed,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediately
flyaway.
Hovering(悬停),rylong
moment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.
Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.
Duringthecookout,
departing,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.I
wasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupand
in
lookeddirectlyintomyeyes,
moment,meonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosay
goodbye.”
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2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.
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Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.
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2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
范文赏析
下水作文
1
：
Paragraph1：
Afewweekslater,hingfeltasifIhadjustleft
kinghouselookedjustasdilapidatedasitwaswhenIwaslasthere,
thoughttruetoherword,ackatthe
ough
alltracesofsuchanunrealeventhasbeenerased,thememoryofmyfatefulmeeting
y,beforeIwentintothe
farmtogreetmyfriends,Iwonderedwhetherthehummingbirdwasstillthriving,and
ifitstillrememberedme.
Paragraph2：
callyasshe
hadgracedusthefirsttime,shesuddenlyshowedupasIwasaboutsaygoodbyeto
me,asifrecognizingme,shecamestraightto
meandhoveredrightinfrontofmygazeasmyfriendscouldonlylookonindisbelief.
Foragoodfewseconds,Ilockedeyeswiththewhimsicalbirdandtimestoodstill.
Onceagain,sheletoutasqueakingcallandtookoff,leavingmyfriendsandI
edonandgotreadytoleave,my
friendsaidtome“cherishsuchamagicalmemoryandbond,thishastobevery
rare”.
下水作文2：
Paragraph1：
Afewweekslater,ectingmemoriesofmyclose
encounterwiththatdelicatepieceofnature,Icouldnothelpbutfeelastrongsenseof
redatthe
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2024年3月20日发(作者：法馨)
2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.I
parkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhad
atawindowcaughtmyattention,so
hummingbird(蜂鸟),
coveredinspider-webs(蛛网)sedher
struggletheinstantIpickedherup.
Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.
edapieceofclothintothe
holeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.
WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithher
,
sshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoo
longandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?
AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawater
bottle,ed,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediately
flyaway.
Hovering(悬停),rylong
moment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.
Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.
Duringthecookout,
departing,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.I
wasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupand
in
lookeddirectlyintomyeyes,
moment,meonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosay
goodbye.”
1
2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________________
Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________________
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2023年1月浙江新高考英语读后续写试题及范文赏析
范文赏析
下水作文
1
：
Paragraph1：
Afewweekslater,hingfeltasifIhadjustleft
kinghouselookedjustasdilapidatedasitwaswhenIwaslasthere,
thoughttruetoherword,ackatthe
ough
alltracesofsuchanunrealeventhasbeenerased,thememoryofmyfatefulmeeting
y,beforeIwentintothe
farmtogreetmyfriends,Iwonderedwhetherthehummingbirdwasstillthriving,and
ifitstillrememberedme.
Paragraph2：
callyasshe
hadgracedusthefirsttime,shesuddenlyshowedupasIwasaboutsaygoodbyeto
me,asifrecognizingme,shecamestraightto
meandhoveredrightinfrontofmygazeasmyfriendscouldonlylookonindisbelief.
Foragoodfewseconds,Ilockedeyeswiththewhimsicalbirdandtimestoodstill.
Onceagain,sheletoutasqueakingcallandtookoff,leavingmyfriendsandI
edonandgotreadytoleave,my
friendsaidtome“cherishsuchamagicalmemoryandbond,thishastobevery
rare”.
下水作文2：
Paragraph1：
Afewweekslater,ectingmemoriesofmyclose
encounterwiththatdelicatepieceofnature,Icouldnothelpbutfeelastrongsenseof
redatthe
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