2024年9月13日发(作者：剑晴波)
09-手机、网络
（一）
现在的人们，离开手机可以说是寸步难行。但过度依赖手机真的好吗？
【预测题目】如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手
机的利弊及你的建议。
满分优秀范文：
Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life. We can use them to
read news，send messages，make phone calls and read all kinds of books. Besides，we can use them to enjoy music，
do some shopping and play games. In a word，mobile phones have made our life more colorful. However，they also
bring us many problems. For example，if people use them while riding，they may have traffic accidents. If we spend
a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study. What's more，they're bad for our eyes and necks. In my
opinion，we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly.
微信
毫无疑问，微信是中国目前使用人数最多的社交工具，无论是城市还是农村，几乎人人都在使用微信。
【预测题目】最近，你们班举行了一场“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会，同学们各抒己见。班长针对
同学们的不同意见，做了以下的记录。请你根据表格内容，以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇英
语短文。
利 弊
1.提供交流的平台。 1.过渡沉溺、影响学习。
2.认识更多的朋友。 2.交友不慎、上当受骗
3.学习更多的东西。 3.长期玩耍、影响视力。
满分优秀范文：
The Opinions of Using WeChat More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have
different opinions about using it. Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to
communicate with their friends. Besides they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may
be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision to use WeChat for a long time. In
my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we
don't use it when we are studying. In addition, we shouldn't add strangers or meet net friends casually.
（三）
受新型冠状病毒肺炎（
Novel coronavirus pneumonia
）影响，学期初全国各学校暂停开学。为贯彻教育
部
“
停课不停学
”
要求，学生们开启了
“
网上学习
”
模式。假如你是王磊，请给你的美国笔友
Alex
介绍网上学
100
要求：
1.
内容包括为什么开展网上学习、你所在的学校如何开展网上学习、网上学习的优缺点以及网上
学习期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情；
2.
说明你对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点的看法和理由；
3.
书写规范，条理清晰，表达流畅。
________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________
优秀满分范文
Dear Alex,
As a result of the spread of Novel coronavirus pneumonia, the Ministry of Education issued a notice to
postpone the start of school. Nearly all the students receive online teaching at home.
The teachers give us lessons and mark our homework on the computer every day. Online teaching not only can
prevent us from being affected, but also can be convenient for our daily life and study. What impresses me most
was that when I didn’t understand something in class, I can find the video to learn it again.
As we all know, everything has two sides. Online teaching will increase our chances to use computer, which
will be harmful to our health. What's more, online teaching will reduce face-to-face communications between
students and teachers. So I don't think online learning will replace school learning.
Yours,
Wang Lei
【详解】
1.
题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。文章主要针对防控新型冠状病毒的影
响，学校延期开学，学生在家进行网课学习。就这种形式谈谈你所在的学校如何开展网上学习、网上学习
的优缺点以及网上学习期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情。并说明你对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点
的看法和理由。
2.
写作指导：本文为提纲作文，第一段叙述受新型冠状病毒肺炎影响，学期初全国各学校暂停开学，学
第二段叙述学校如何开展网上学习、
期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情；第三段叙述网上学习的缺点及对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点的
看法和理由。
（四）
随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。
“
网上学习（
online learning
）
”
这一新的学习模式备受
青睐。假设你是陈欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班
级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。
提示：
观点
赞成
1.
网上资源（
resource
）丰富
理由
2.
可以自由（
freedom
）选择学习内容
和时间
要求：
1
、词数不少于
80
词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
2
、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；
3
、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
优秀满分范文
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
反对
1.
网上信息太多，有些不真实
2.
长时间用电脑对眼睛不好
useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students
don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true.
Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.
In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and
online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以
“
网上学习（
online learning
）
”
为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，
阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。
写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符
合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
is filled with, what’s more, a lot of
，
however,
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中
more convenient
，
although, ,be bad for, in my opinion
等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处
使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得
学习。
（五）
对于
“
中学生在校是否可以使用手机
”
，不同的学生有不同的看法，请你根据表格提示写一篇短文。
观点
赞成
1.
便于联系，
……
理由
2.
获取信息，
……
你的观点和理由
要求：
1.
包括所有要点，不得逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
2.
书写规范、工整，条理清楚；
3.
文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；
4.
词数：
80-100
，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at
2.
危害身心健康
……
反对
1.
浪费信息，
……
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Nowadays, more and more teenagers use
mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Different students have different opinions
about students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call
their parents,teachers or ,they can search what they need on mobile phones. For ex-ample,they
can look up new words and look through news.
However,some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.
Many students spend too much time on games and s,it's unhealthy for the mind and the
body,such as hurting eyes,making some bad friends.
In my opinion,students can't use mobile phones at 's bad for our health and study.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们对中学生在学校是否可以用手机这一话题做一个介绍。这是一篇议论文，
短文的中心已经给出，内容主要分成三个方面，一个是赞成中学生在学校用手机的；另一个是
反对的；最后来表达自己的看法。议论文属于比较容易写的作文，因为它论点明确，短文的结
构很清楚。这篇作文的难点有两个：一个是注意英语表达和汉语习惯上的不同，句式的表达要
从整体考虑，而不能逐词翻译；另一个难点是用自己的话来发表自己的观点，这要求学生们发
挥自己的想象力，将这一部分的内容补充完整。评判作文水平还有一个标准是整篇文章的表达
是否流畅，因此学生们在写作的时候，应使用一些高级的句式和短语，增强文章的表现力。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文根据题目要求介绍了对中学生在小是否可以使用手机的
情况。这篇作文分成了三个方面，首先介绍了文章的中心话题，用了三句话
Can middle school
students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can
middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about
it
引出了下文；接下来是从正反两个方面介绍了赞成或反对的同学们的观点；最后发表了自己
的看法。内容完整、充实，结构很清晰。这篇短文里使用了比较多的句型和短语，如
First, it's
convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends.
、
For example, they can look up new
it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.
等等。
（六）
随着互联网的发展，智能手机（
smart-phone
）已被广泛使用。我们身边的＂低头族
(phubber)
＂随处可
见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以＂
Refuse to be phubbers
＂为题写一篇
90
词左右的短文。
现
象
弊
影响与家人，朋友的关系（
relationship
）；容易因发生交通事故，不利于学习和工作。
端
观
正确利用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天
……
点
要求：
1.
短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.
题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
1. have effects on
对
……
有影响
2. concentrate on
聚焦于
……
3. face-to-face conversation
面对面交流
4. make good use of
充分利用
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here
and there.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
________
优秀满分范文
Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.
Phubbers can be seen here and there. Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with
families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their
smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some
children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study. In fact,
face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are
helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than
Phubbers
。
【解析】
试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以
“Refusetobephubbers”
为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象
与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利
用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。
写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉
人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。
文中用了
whiledoing
，
insteadof,ratherthan
等等结构，给短文增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
（七）
话题作文：近来网络上流行一句话：
“
世界上最远的距离是我在你对面，你却在看手机。
”
这句话真实反
“
手机控
”
，
“
低头族
”
越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。映了当前的社会现象，请你以
“My opinion on using the mobile
phone"
为题针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。
优秀满分范文
My opinion on using the mobile phones
Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of
things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile
phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.
I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise.
It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it, it influences our study and lives. We have less and less time
to communicate with others.
In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time.
Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.
I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇短文要求对
‘
手机控
’
这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。结合要求可以首先描述
现在的实际情况，然后发表个人观点，最后提出改进意见。短文主要用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色
.. Not only the adults but also the children
are members of them.
，
such as
，
More and more
，
I don't think it's normal.
，
less and less
，
In my opinion, instead
of
，学习中注意总结
,
牢记一些固定句式及短语
,
写作时就可以适当引用
,
让文章更出彩。
【考点定位】话题作文
（八）
沉迷网络游戏
题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所
给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。
提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
满分优秀范文：
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of
his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on
his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is
bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after
school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to
concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can
do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents
and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
（九）
关于手机的英语作文
directions:for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:turn off your cell
should write at least 100 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：
1、手机给我们带来便利，在我们的生活中不可或缺；但手机有坏处，请关闭手机。
2、关闭手机的原因
3、结论：在某些场合请关掉你的手机。
要求：
1、语句通顺。
2、字数100左右。
满分优秀范文：
We usually use cell phone to communicate with each r，just as everything has two sides，we can
also find its disadvantages as well as its advantages.
To begin with，it will be annoying to other people while they are having an important meeting，you just make
or answer the call by the cell phone.
It's a bad manner for you to behave like you are a student，you should also turn off your cell phone in
ise，the teacher and your classmates can't concentrate on the studying.
Cell phone sometimes may bring the danger to our example，while you are driving a car，a call from
the cell phone can disturb your attention，it's easy to cause the traffic you are a doctor，you will lose the
best time to save the patient's life if you answer the call，especially during the operation.
All in all，we should turn off our cell phone in some special occasions just for the safety，only in this way can
we construct a harmonious society .
（十）
网络的使用使人们的日常生活更加便利，请谈一谈网络给你的生活和学习带来了哪些方便，至少写
出五点。要求：本次写作要求以第一人称，使用一般现在时来陈述网络给我们的日常生活带来的一些便
利。
提示：
了解国内外新闻Iearn news at home and abroad
收发邮件send e-mails
上网络学校go to Net school
2024年9月13日发(作者：剑晴波)
09-手机、网络
（一）
现在的人们，离开手机可以说是寸步难行。但过度依赖手机真的好吗？
【预测题目】如今边走路边玩手机的“低头族”随处可见。请为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，谈谈使用手
机的利弊及你的建议。
满分优秀范文：
Nowadays，mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life. We can use them to
read news，send messages，make phone calls and read all kinds of books. Besides，we can use them to enjoy music，
do some shopping and play games. In a word，mobile phones have made our life more colorful. However，they also
bring us many problems. For example，if people use them while riding，they may have traffic accidents. If we spend
a lot of time on the mobile phones，it may affect our study. What's more，they're bad for our eyes and necks. In my
opinion，we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly.
微信
毫无疑问，微信是中国目前使用人数最多的社交工具，无论是城市还是农村，几乎人人都在使用微信。
【预测题目】最近，你们班举行了一场“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会，同学们各抒己见。班长针对
同学们的不同意见，做了以下的记录。请你根据表格内容，以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇英
语短文。
利 弊
1.提供交流的平台。 1.过渡沉溺、影响学习。
2.认识更多的朋友。 2.交友不慎、上当受骗
3.学习更多的东西。 3.长期玩耍、影响视力。
满分优秀范文：
The Opinions of Using WeChat More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have
different opinions about using it. Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to
communicate with their friends. Besides they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may
be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision to use WeChat for a long time. In
my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we
don't use it when we are studying. In addition, we shouldn't add strangers or meet net friends casually.
（三）
受新型冠状病毒肺炎（
Novel coronavirus pneumonia
）影响，学期初全国各学校暂停开学。为贯彻教育
部
“
停课不停学
”
要求，学生们开启了
“
网上学习
”
模式。假如你是王磊，请给你的美国笔友
Alex
介绍网上学
100
要求：
1.
内容包括为什么开展网上学习、你所在的学校如何开展网上学习、网上学习的优缺点以及网上
学习期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情；
2.
说明你对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点的看法和理由；
3.
书写规范，条理清晰，表达流畅。
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________
优秀满分范文
Dear Alex,
As a result of the spread of Novel coronavirus pneumonia, the Ministry of Education issued a notice to
postpone the start of school. Nearly all the students receive online teaching at home.
The teachers give us lessons and mark our homework on the computer every day. Online teaching not only can
prevent us from being affected, but also can be convenient for our daily life and study. What impresses me most
was that when I didn’t understand something in class, I can find the video to learn it again.
As we all know, everything has two sides. Online teaching will increase our chances to use computer, which
will be harmful to our health. What's more, online teaching will reduce face-to-face communications between
students and teachers. So I don't think online learning will replace school learning.
Yours,
Wang Lei
【详解】
1.
题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。文章主要针对防控新型冠状病毒的影
响，学校延期开学，学生在家进行网课学习。就这种形式谈谈你所在的学校如何开展网上学习、网上学习
的优缺点以及网上学习期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情。并说明你对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点
的看法和理由。
2.
写作指导：本文为提纲作文，第一段叙述受新型冠状病毒肺炎影响，学期初全国各学校暂停开学，学
第二段叙述学校如何开展网上学习、
期间发生的让你印象最深刻的事情；第三段叙述网上学习的缺点及对
“
网上学习会取代学校学习
”
这个观点的
看法和理由。
（四）
随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。
“
网上学习（
online learning
）
”
这一新的学习模式备受
青睐。假设你是陈欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班
级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的想法。
提示：
观点
赞成
1.
网上资源（
resource
）丰富
理由
2.
可以自由（
freedom
）选择学习内容
和时间
要求：
1
、词数不少于
80
词，稿件的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
2
、向子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯；
3
、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名。
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
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Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.
反对
1.
网上信息太多，有些不真实
2.
长时间用电脑对眼睛不好
useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students
don’t welcome it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true.
Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.
In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and
online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以
“
网上学习（
online learning
）
”
为话题，结合本题所给的写作信息，
阐述网上学习的两种不同的观点。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。
写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符
合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
is filled with, what’s more, a lot of
，
however,
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中
more convenient
，
although, ,be bad for, in my opinion
等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处
使用了宾语从句、让步状语从句、动名词作主语等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得
学习。
（五）
对于
“
中学生在校是否可以使用手机
”
，不同的学生有不同的看法，请你根据表格提示写一篇短文。
观点
赞成
1.
便于联系，
……
理由
2.
获取信息，
……
你的观点和理由
要求：
1.
包括所有要点，不得逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
2.
书写规范、工整，条理清楚；
3.
文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；
4.
词数：
80-100
，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at
2.
危害身心健康
……
反对
1.
浪费信息，
……
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【答案】
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Nowadays, more and more teenagers use
mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Different students have different opinions
about students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call
their parents,teachers or ,they can search what they need on mobile phones. For ex-ample,they
can look up new words and look through news.
However,some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.
Many students spend too much time on games and s,it's unhealthy for the mind and the
body,such as hurting eyes,making some bad friends.
In my opinion,students can't use mobile phones at 's bad for our health and study.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们对中学生在学校是否可以用手机这一话题做一个介绍。这是一篇议论文，
短文的中心已经给出，内容主要分成三个方面，一个是赞成中学生在学校用手机的；另一个是
反对的；最后来表达自己的看法。议论文属于比较容易写的作文，因为它论点明确，短文的结
构很清楚。这篇作文的难点有两个：一个是注意英语表达和汉语习惯上的不同，句式的表达要
从整体考虑，而不能逐词翻译；另一个难点是用自己的话来发表自己的观点，这要求学生们发
挥自己的想象力，将这一部分的内容补充完整。评判作文水平还有一个标准是整篇文章的表达
是否流畅，因此学生们在写作的时候，应使用一些高级的句式和短语，增强文章的表现力。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文根据题目要求介绍了对中学生在小是否可以使用手机的
情况。这篇作文分成了三个方面，首先介绍了文章的中心话题，用了三句话
Can middle school
students use mobile phones at school? Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can
middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about
it
引出了下文；接下来是从正反两个方面介绍了赞成或反对的同学们的观点；最后发表了自己
的看法。内容完整、充实，结构很清晰。这篇短文里使用了比较多的句型和短语，如
First, it's
convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends.
、
For example, they can look up new
it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.
等等。
（六）
随着互联网的发展，智能手机（
smart-phone
）已被广泛使用。我们身边的＂低头族
(phubber)
＂随处可
见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以＂
Refuse to be phubbers
＂为题写一篇
90
词左右的短文。
现
象
弊
影响与家人，朋友的关系（
relationship
）；容易因发生交通事故，不利于学习和工作。
端
观
正确利用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天
……
点
要求：
1.
短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.
题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
1. have effects on
对
……
有影响
2. concentrate on
聚焦于
……
3. face-to-face conversation
面对面交流
4. make good use of
充分利用
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here
and there.
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Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.
Phubbers can be seen here and there. Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with
families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their
smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some
children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study. In fact,
face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are
helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than
Phubbers
。
【解析】
试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以
“Refusetobephubbers”
为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象
与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利
用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。
写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉
人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。
文中用了
whiledoing
，
insteadof,ratherthan
等等结构，给短文增色不少。
考点：提纲作文。
（七）
话题作文：近来网络上流行一句话：
“
世界上最远的距离是我在你对面，你却在看手机。
”
这句话真实反
“
手机控
”
，
“
低头族
”
越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。映了当前的社会现象，请你以
“My opinion on using the mobile
phone"
为题针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。
优秀满分范文
My opinion on using the mobile phones
Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of
things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile
phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.
I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise.
It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it, it influences our study and lives. We have less and less time
to communicate with others.
In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time.
Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.
I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇短文要求对
‘
手机控
’
这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。结合要求可以首先描述
现在的实际情况，然后发表个人观点，最后提出改进意见。短文主要用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色
.. Not only the adults but also the children
are members of them.
，
such as
，
More and more
，
I don't think it's normal.
，
less and less
，
In my opinion, instead
of
，学习中注意总结
,
牢记一些固定句式及短语
,
写作时就可以适当引用
,
让文章更出彩。
【考点定位】话题作文
（八）
沉迷网络游戏
题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所
给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。
提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in
满分优秀范文：
Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of
his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on
his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is
bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after
school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to
concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can
do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents
and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
（九）
关于手机的英语作文
directions:for this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:turn off your cell
should write at least 100 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：
1、手机给我们带来便利，在我们的生活中不可或缺；但手机有坏处，请关闭手机。
2、关闭手机的原因
3、结论：在某些场合请关掉你的手机。
要求：
1、语句通顺。
2、字数100左右。
满分优秀范文：
We usually use cell phone to communicate with each r，just as everything has two sides，we can
also find its disadvantages as well as its advantages.
To begin with，it will be annoying to other people while they are having an important meeting，you just make
or answer the call by the cell phone.
It's a bad manner for you to behave like you are a student，you should also turn off your cell phone in
ise，the teacher and your classmates can't concentrate on the studying.
Cell phone sometimes may bring the danger to our example，while you are driving a car，a call from
the cell phone can disturb your attention，it's easy to cause the traffic you are a doctor，you will lose the
best time to save the patient's life if you answer the call，especially during the operation.
All in all，we should turn off our cell phone in some special occasions just for the safety，only in this way can
we construct a harmonious society .
（十）
网络的使用使人们的日常生活更加便利，请谈一谈网络给你的生活和学习带来了哪些方便，至少写
出五点。要求：本次写作要求以第一人称，使用一般现在时来陈述网络给我们的日常生活带来的一些便
利。
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