2024年2月15日发(作者：栗贤)
高一期末考试读后续写 ------ 修复友谊
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sitting on the edge of my bed, I sort through old photos, thin smiles sliding
across my face. I hold each memory briefly in my hands before dropping them onto
the pile in my lap and searching for the next happy moment to remember. Each
picture brings up feelings deep within me.
As I relive the memories, I can't help but notice one photo in particular, hidden
deep in the box. The picture at first glance(一瞥) is lovely. The sun was shining and I
was sitting with my arm around a happy-looking girl, her arm rested casually on my
shoulders. As I focus on the happy girl, the smile that covers my face becomes a
frown(皱眉). It is Amy Soule,My now ex-best friend. A terrible pang(一阵剧痛) of
regret comes into my mind and I feel tightness in my throat.
The change in our relationship began with different wanted to go to
the mall and shop, while I preferred to watch old movies in my spare time. Soon the
only time I saw her was when we exchanged a hurried hello in the busy school halls
between the classes. No more notes were passed behind the teacher's back. She found
a new group of friends, and so did I had a chance to repair the friendship, she
moved away, causing an uncrossable gap.
I made excuses for it. But deep down I knew that was not the truth. I was just too
nervous to pick up the phone and call. Eventually the gap grew too large to bridge.
I stand up and pull myself back into the now. Glancing up at my calendar. I
remember Amy's birthday is around the corner. In fact, we were born in the same
room, two days apart. We started so close and ended up so far. This bittersweet
memory causes me to smile despite my feelings of regret.
注意：1. 续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly I have an idea.
I stick(粘, 贴) the note under the edge of the photo frame(相框) and search for
Amy's address.
审题步骤：
1.阅读原材料，把握主要情节及材料主题 (抓关键词，尤其动词,形容词和名词)
enjoy the ______ moment → notice one photo(ex-best friend) →
_____ (too large to bridge)→ _______despite my feelings of regret
2.观察给出的首句进行逻辑推理(Para.1结尾处一定要参考Para.2首句内容)
Suddenly I have an idea.
I stick(粘, 贴) the note under the edge of the photo frame(相框) and search for
Amy's address.
3.一定注意原材料时态
要求：
故事情节要完整，连贯；表达准确，句式丰富; 文章结束时要点明主题,升华情感。
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Para.1 将故事情节补充完整(结合Para.1结尾和Para.2首句)
an idea: ____________________________.
the photo frame：（结合上文的照片）____________________________.
the note: ____________________________.
1. I can give Amy a gift to ____________________ .
2. I find a photo frame in ___________ to ____________ .
3. I write a note _____ says "Happy Birthday, Amy! "(定语从句)
Para.1 (初级版)
Suddenly, I have an idea. I can ___________ to _____ our friendship. So I find
_______________ in my drawers to put the photo I write a note __________
"Happy Birthday, Amy! "
升级: 添加合适的副词来修饰动词
Para.2 故事收尾+感悟/升华主题
收尾：____________________________.
感悟/升华主题：
这是修复我们友谊的好机会。____________________________.
友谊在我们生活中很重要，值得我们付出努力。
_______________________________________________________.
Para.2 (初级版)
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
Finally I find it. My gift is not much, but it is a good chance ________ our friendship,
________ is very important in our life and worth our efforts.
升级: 根据需要添加或替换原有词汇
Finally I ______ gift is not much,but it is a _______ chance to repair our
friendship,which is ____________________ in our life and worth our efforts.
成文一：
Suddenly, I have an idea.I can give Amy a gift to restart our friendship. So I
quickly find a photo frame in my drawers to put the photo I
carefully/sincerely write a note which says "Happy Birthday, Amy! "
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
Finally I make gift is not much,but it is a golden chance to repair our
friendship,which is one of the most precious things in our life and worth our efforts.
再升级: (心理描写 动作描写) (分词短语 介词短语)
Suddenly, I have an idea.〖Why not repair our friendship through a birthday
gift?And isn't the picture the best present for her?〗(心理描写)So I quickly go
through my drawers(动作描写) and find a picture frame to put the photo in, hoping
this will remind her of our precious friendship and happy moment we spent
together.(分词短语进行补充) Then I sincerely write a simple note saying "Happy
Birthday, Amy！"(分词短语更简洁，更紧凑)
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
To my joy, (介词短语增强连贯性) I finally make it as I wished. Again I hold the
frame tightly in my arms. (动作描写) To be sure, this gift is not much, but really a
golden chance to repair our friendship, which is one of the most precious things in our
life and worth our efforts.
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2024年2月15日发(作者：栗贤)
高一期末考试读后续写 ------ 修复友谊
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sitting on the edge of my bed, I sort through old photos, thin smiles sliding
across my face. I hold each memory briefly in my hands before dropping them onto
the pile in my lap and searching for the next happy moment to remember. Each
picture brings up feelings deep within me.
As I relive the memories, I can't help but notice one photo in particular, hidden
deep in the box. The picture at first glance(一瞥) is lovely. The sun was shining and I
was sitting with my arm around a happy-looking girl, her arm rested casually on my
shoulders. As I focus on the happy girl, the smile that covers my face becomes a
frown(皱眉). It is Amy Soule,My now ex-best friend. A terrible pang(一阵剧痛) of
regret comes into my mind and I feel tightness in my throat.
The change in our relationship began with different wanted to go to
the mall and shop, while I preferred to watch old movies in my spare time. Soon the
only time I saw her was when we exchanged a hurried hello in the busy school halls
between the classes. No more notes were passed behind the teacher's back. She found
a new group of friends, and so did I had a chance to repair the friendship, she
moved away, causing an uncrossable gap.
I made excuses for it. But deep down I knew that was not the truth. I was just too
nervous to pick up the phone and call. Eventually the gap grew too large to bridge.
I stand up and pull myself back into the now. Glancing up at my calendar. I
remember Amy's birthday is around the corner. In fact, we were born in the same
room, two days apart. We started so close and ended up so far. This bittersweet
memory causes me to smile despite my feelings of regret.
注意：1. 续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly I have an idea.
I stick(粘, 贴) the note under the edge of the photo frame(相框) and search for
Amy's address.
审题步骤：
1.阅读原材料，把握主要情节及材料主题 (抓关键词，尤其动词,形容词和名词)
enjoy the ______ moment → notice one photo(ex-best friend) →
_____ (too large to bridge)→ _______despite my feelings of regret
2.观察给出的首句进行逻辑推理(Para.1结尾处一定要参考Para.2首句内容)
Suddenly I have an idea.
I stick(粘, 贴) the note under the edge of the photo frame(相框) and search for
Amy's address.
3.一定注意原材料时态
要求：
故事情节要完整，连贯；表达准确，句式丰富; 文章结束时要点明主题,升华情感。
1
Para.1 将故事情节补充完整(结合Para.1结尾和Para.2首句)
an idea: ____________________________.
the photo frame：（结合上文的照片）____________________________.
the note: ____________________________.
1. I can give Amy a gift to ____________________ .
2. I find a photo frame in ___________ to ____________ .
3. I write a note _____ says "Happy Birthday, Amy! "(定语从句)
Para.1 (初级版)
Suddenly, I have an idea. I can ___________ to _____ our friendship. So I find
_______________ in my drawers to put the photo I write a note __________
"Happy Birthday, Amy! "
升级: 添加合适的副词来修饰动词
Para.2 故事收尾+感悟/升华主题
收尾：____________________________.
感悟/升华主题：
这是修复我们友谊的好机会。____________________________.
友谊在我们生活中很重要，值得我们付出努力。
_______________________________________________________.
Para.2 (初级版)
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
Finally I find it. My gift is not much, but it is a good chance ________ our friendship,
________ is very important in our life and worth our efforts.
升级: 根据需要添加或替换原有词汇
Finally I ______ gift is not much,but it is a _______ chance to repair our
friendship,which is ____________________ in our life and worth our efforts.
成文一：
Suddenly, I have an idea.I can give Amy a gift to restart our friendship. So I
quickly find a photo frame in my drawers to put the photo I
carefully/sincerely write a note which says "Happy Birthday, Amy! "
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
Finally I make gift is not much,but it is a golden chance to repair our
friendship,which is one of the most precious things in our life and worth our efforts.
再升级: (心理描写 动作描写) (分词短语 介词短语)
Suddenly, I have an idea.〖Why not repair our friendship through a birthday
gift?And isn't the picture the best present for her?〗(心理描写)So I quickly go
through my drawers(动作描写) and find a picture frame to put the photo in, hoping
this will remind her of our precious friendship and happy moment we spent
together.(分词短语进行补充) Then I sincerely write a simple note saying "Happy
Birthday, Amy！"(分词短语更简洁，更紧凑)
I stick the note under an edge of the photo frame and search for Amy's address.
To my joy, (介词短语增强连贯性) I finally make it as I wished. Again I hold the
frame tightly in my arms. (动作描写) To be sure, this gift is not much, but really a
golden chance to repair our friendship, which is one of the most precious things in our
life and worth our efforts.
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