2024年2月19日发(作者：务丝萝)
2018江苏卷完形填空赏析
Raynor Winn and her husband Moth became homeless due to their
wrong investment. Their savings had been used up to pay lawyers’ fees.
To make matters worse, Moth was diagnosed(诊断)with a serious disease.
There was no cure, only pain relief.
Failing to find any other way out, they decided to make a walking
journey, as they caught sight of an old hikers’(徒步旅行者)guide.
This was a long journey of unaccustomed hardship and surprising
recovery. When leaving home, Raynor and Moth had just ￡320 in the
bank. They planned to keep the budget low by living on boiled noodles,
with the occasional hamburger shop treat.
Wild camping is illegal in England. To avoid being caught, the
Winns had to get their tent up late and packed it away early in the
morning. The Winns soon discovered that daily hiking in their 50s is a lot
harder than they remember it was in their ached all over and
desired a bath. Moth, meanwhile, after an initial struggle, found his
symptoms were strangely reduced by their daily tiring journey.
Eventually, the couple found that their bodies turned for the better,
with re-found strong muscles that they thought had lost forever. “Our hair
was fried and falling out, nails broken, clothes worn to a thread, but we
were alive.”
During the journey, Raynor began a career as a nature writer. She
writes, “Homelessness had taken every material thing from me and left
me torn bare, an empty page at the end of a partly written book. It had
also given me a choice, either to leave that page blank or to keep writing
the story with hope. I chose hope.”
体裁：记叙文 叙事
题材：人与人 夫妻遇难，徒步旅行，因祸得福。
难词：
was diagnosed(诊断)with 被诊断得…..病
unaccustomed hardship 不一般的艰辛
好词：
pain relief 疼痛减轻
find any other way out 找到解决之道
the occasional hamburger shop treat 偶尔去汉堡店吃一顿
to get their tent up late and packed it away early in the morning
晚上很晚支起帐篷, 第二天一早就要收起来
好句：
The Winns soon discovered that daily hiking in their 50s is a lot harder
than they remember it was in their 20s.
这一家人很快发现50几岁的白天徒步旅行要比过去20几岁难得太多.
Our hair was fried and falling out, nails broken, clothes worn to a thread,
but we were alive.
头发像油炸过一样，乱七八糟，而且不停脱落，指甲断裂，衣服破了只剩一条线，但我们活下来了。（省略句）
Homelessness had taken every material thing from me and left me torn
bare, an empty page at the end of a partly written book. It had also given
me a choice, either to leave that page blank or to keep writing the story
with hope. I chose hope.
无家可归已经让我一无所有，留下我衣不蔽体，有如一本未完待写的书的最后一张空白页。无家可归同样给了我一个选择，选择留下那一页空白不添一笔，选择写下希望的篇章。我选择希望（后者）。
这是个比喻，作者用希望书写下半生。
篇章结构（含段落）：
文章按照时间顺序,夹叙夹议,最后点明中心.
2024年2月19日发(作者：务丝萝)
2018江苏卷完形填空赏析
Raynor Winn and her husband Moth became homeless due to their
wrong investment. Their savings had been used up to pay lawyers’ fees.
To make matters worse, Moth was diagnosed(诊断)with a serious disease.
There was no cure, only pain relief.
Failing to find any other way out, they decided to make a walking
journey, as they caught sight of an old hikers’(徒步旅行者)guide.
This was a long journey of unaccustomed hardship and surprising
recovery. When leaving home, Raynor and Moth had just ￡320 in the
bank. They planned to keep the budget low by living on boiled noodles,
with the occasional hamburger shop treat.
Wild camping is illegal in England. To avoid being caught, the
Winns had to get their tent up late and packed it away early in the
morning. The Winns soon discovered that daily hiking in their 50s is a lot
harder than they remember it was in their ached all over and
desired a bath. Moth, meanwhile, after an initial struggle, found his
symptoms were strangely reduced by their daily tiring journey.
Eventually, the couple found that their bodies turned for the better,
with re-found strong muscles that they thought had lost forever. “Our hair
was fried and falling out, nails broken, clothes worn to a thread, but we
were alive.”
During the journey, Raynor began a career as a nature writer. She
writes, “Homelessness had taken every material thing from me and left
me torn bare, an empty page at the end of a partly written book. It had
also given me a choice, either to leave that page blank or to keep writing
the story with hope. I chose hope.”
体裁：记叙文 叙事
题材：人与人 夫妻遇难，徒步旅行，因祸得福。
难词：
was diagnosed(诊断)with 被诊断得…..病
unaccustomed hardship 不一般的艰辛
好词：
pain relief 疼痛减轻
find any other way out 找到解决之道
the occasional hamburger shop treat 偶尔去汉堡店吃一顿
to get their tent up late and packed it away early in the morning
晚上很晚支起帐篷, 第二天一早就要收起来
好句：
The Winns soon discovered that daily hiking in their 50s is a lot harder
than they remember it was in their 20s.
这一家人很快发现50几岁的白天徒步旅行要比过去20几岁难得太多.
Our hair was fried and falling out, nails broken, clothes worn to a thread,
but we were alive.
头发像油炸过一样，乱七八糟，而且不停脱落，指甲断裂，衣服破了只剩一条线，但我们活下来了。（省略句）
Homelessness had taken every material thing from me and left me torn
bare, an empty page at the end of a partly written book. It had also given
me a choice, either to leave that page blank or to keep writing the story
with hope. I chose hope.
无家可归已经让我一无所有，留下我衣不蔽体，有如一本未完待写的书的最后一张空白页。无家可归同样给了我一个选择，选择留下那一页空白不添一笔，选择写下希望的篇章。我选择希望（后者）。
这是个比喻，作者用希望书写下半生。
篇章结构（含段落）：
文章按照时间顺序,夹叙夹议,最后点明中心.